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A rushed out, error riddled, sub par, railroaded mess.
There are numerous pronoun errors that have supposedly female characters suddenly being male. EX: "...to overlook his shady..." then directly followed by "She often poses..."
The dialogue and charac
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ok
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This is more of a 'maybe' recommendation, but when you come down to it that's essentially a 'no'.
First, the good: The parts of this book that are like an ordinary Choice of Games book (which is, in terms of volume, most of it), are decent. Allying/bet
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This was a really good story. I would say that my only real complaint was that it seemed a bit rushed. It honestly seemed like right after beginning, it was over. Other that that though, I loved it. I'd give it an 8/10.
